Hi Man I played this and its very ambitious if this is your first map but I'm sorry it is way too buggy to the point where I will not play it again unless it is fixed.
eg, we had insta kill on for nearly the whole game, double tap was way too high rate of fire and we had to down ourselves to lose it, just ruined the experience for us, there were spawn glitches including dogs spawning stuck in the air etc.
That said, your ideas such as the flying teleporters are epic, I would encourage you to fix the bugs and upload an updated version.